TaleSpin-Karnage's Daughter [OC] concept sketck 1

This is just my first rough sketch of Don Karnage's (OC) daughter, the younger of his two children. 

This is just my first test sketch. I plan on refining it any feedback would be greatly appreciated. 

[Back story Idea]
    Years back Kit Cloudkicker was living with the Air pirates undecided whether or not he wanted to stay. Kit lived with the pirates for one year. During those years Kit Was taken in to the inner island of the pirate islands to the many small island hidden behind the many volcanoes, where the families of the prates dwelled. There he met a young Male Red Wolf just older them himself (Karnage's Son) in training to become a pilot and successor to the leadership of the Air Pirates. And a Younger Female Red wolf cub much younger. This little Red wolf cub fell smitten with Kit. While Kit was on the land she would follow him everywhere. 
   The day Iron vulture returned with Kit now where to be found and news that he was now a traitor, she was devastated. She vowed to herself that one day she would find him and make him pay for breaking her heart. She took up training same as her older brother. But girls in the air pirate were rear and Karnage forbid her to learn to fly, she learned any way and soon surpassed her brother and any pirate they had in their band. 
    She now hunts for Kit secretly when the other pirates leave her alone, but all the pirates (even more so her brother) are very protective of her. So if she is caught out along she gets ran in ( if they can catch her). She mostly dose what she wants since she is mostly unmatched except for her father and brother.  
[Back story Idea end]